स्वतंत्र फूल
कितलेंच गीम पळयले
कितलीच थंडी पळयली
पावसान चिप्प भिंजून
वताचो रखरख घेवन
थंड शियेंत लेगीत हांव जियेले
इतलो त्रास सोसून हांव
म्हजे सूखदिणे जिण जगताले
खोशियेन डोलताले
पूण एक दीस भोवरो
येवन म्हजेच भोंवतणी
भोंवूक लागलो
म्हाका थार भंय दिसलो
ताचो आवाज म्हाज्यान
सोंसूक जायना जालो
हांव तशेंच मोने रावले
आनी ताणी म्हाजो
फायदो घेतलो
म्हजो सगळो रस
ताणें चोखून घेतलो
आनी उडून गेलो
म्हजी एक-एक पाखली
गळून पडली आनी
हांव बोडके जाले
पूण म्हजे फूडले पिळगेन
मात हो अन्याय
सोंसलो ना
तो भोवरो जेन्ना आयलो
तेन्ना तांच्या आवाजान
ती तशींच रावली ना
ती वाऱ्या नेटान धोंलत रावलीं
आनी त्या भोवऱ्याक तांचेर
बसपाची संद दिली ना
तो भोवरो उडून गेलो
आनी ती फुला खोशी जाली
आपली जीण जीयेत रावली
तो भोवरो परत येयलो ना
आनी तांच्या भंयान
ती परत रावली ना
सैम ताचो वांगडी
जालो आनी ती
स्वतंत्रपणान जियेवपाक भियेली ना
About the poem:With this poem I want to describe the life of all the girls through the problems faced by a flower in her life.So the flowers are the girls and the bee are all the people who treat women badly and the nature is our society.
In these poem the flower was living a peaceful and happy life but one day a bee came.By the buzzing sound made by the bee the flower felt scared and stood still and quite.The bee sucked the nectar from the flower and flew away.The petals of the whole flower felt down.
But the next generation of flowers did not tolerate this behaviour!When the bee came, with their full energy and with the help of wind the flowers started to swing they did not allow the bee to sit on them and the bee went away.The bee never came back and the flowers did not get scared of him anymore.With the help of the nature the flower started to live a independent and free life.
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